Gone Forever
His eyes sparking in the moonlight
Always looking happy and bright
His smile so soft and sweet
I wish we could always meet
i could feel his soft breath
Slowing down and almost close to death
As tears started filling my eyes
I cried so hard as I said my Good Byes
He was gone forever, only alive in my mind
Leaving all of my heart and soul behind
2 comments:
WOW khadra this is SO good!! it is really deep and very sad...it sounds like a heartbreaking moment. but it really gets your point across. this is very good poetry! the only thing i would say about it is that you have a couple typos, like you spelled soft wrong. other than that this is really great. wow!
niiice khadra! this poem is cool and you said you don't know how to write poems very funny. this poem is great. its a bit sad but understandable. this poem is cool!!!
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